Ok, third shot. Colour change and adjustments to the type, let me know what you think...I will let you no that staring at that pink on screen for a while really messes with your eyes! Enjoy...
Does the title on the right line up with the penguin logo at the bottom? Also I'd prefer the barcode not to be slightly offset the 'wave'. Typeface looks way better now (the one you used for the title), the 'of' is still pretty on its own though. However, I'm liking the way you set the type on the back.
Does the title on the right line up with the penguin logo at the bottom? Also I'd prefer the barcode not to be slightly offset the 'wave'. Typeface looks way better now (the one you used for the title), the 'of' is still pretty on its own though.
ReplyDeleteHowever, I'm liking the way you set the type on the back.