3 June 2011

dissertation feedback

This was a difficult period. The dreaded dissertation results. Needless to say my knees were a quivering and my palms were most definitely sweaty! So, this is what I got.

Tutor Comment:

Good attempt to apply phenomenology to the study of skateboarding. Partial and somewhat limited use of Merleau-Ponty - this would have further opened-up the topic.

A good problematisation of the fusion of boarding and phenomenology; argues for experiential themes and identifies sociological elements.
Over-reliant on Brymer

A few more illustrations would be welcome.

Not bad so far. What did I get?

A 2.1! Yes! I'm happy

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